terajk: Ryoga, grabbing Ranma by his pajama-top and shouting: "Do you remember where my house is?!" (death the kid)
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Title: Precise and Perfect
Fandom: Soul Eater
Characters: wee!Death the Kid, Shinigami-sama
Rating: G
Word count: ~300
Summary: He didn't think something so perfectly balanced could bug him so much, but it does.

He didn’t think something so perfectly balanced could bug him so much, but it does.

And it’s really unfair: he likes it when Father takes him human-watching. They go to Deathbucks (he gets a hot chocolate; Father gets tea) and then go to a park or a mall and tell each other stories about the people they see. But he can’t concentrate today because this bugs him.

Two grownup humans walked by a while ago; they had bathing suits and beach towels and a little girl between them, a little younger than himself. She held her parents’ right and left hands in each of hers (he knows that some humans have two parents--it’s unfair) and they...

They were wearing sandals, so he counted their toes. Twice. Twenty toes between them, properly divided up: precise and perfect. (He keeps counting them in his head, over and over and over. It’s annoying.)

He counted their fingers: precise and perfect. (The same.)

He saw more of the human body than he’d seen in his entire life, and nothing looked wrong. Out of place. Missing. And yet, there she was: that girl.

(“Do humans have tails, Father?”

“No, I don’t think so.”)

Darn it! It’s almost enough to make him ask, and that time Father told him where shinigami came from was horrible: he cried and cried and cried. ("I don’t mind missing a toe, son! I’d much rather have you than a toe!”) But this bugs him.

“Father?”

“ 'Sup?”

“Where do humans come from?” he asks.

“From other humans, of course. Other than that, I don’t know.” Father sips his tea.

He knows Father is lying, but he just holds his hot chocolate close and blows. Because he also knows that Uncle Spirit has a little girl, too.

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Date: 2012-03-11 08:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] nenena
Oh this is perfect. I love the idea of Shinigami-sama taking Kid out just to watch humans, and lying to Kid about where human babies come from, and Kid knowing that he's lying but being (for the time being) patient about it. It's such a perfect microcosmic portrayal of their entire relationship. ♥

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